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| + | You don't write paragraphs. | ||
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| + | Do you get information about the 5 Ws? | ||
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| + | Yes I get informations About the 5 Ws. | ||
Aktuelle Version vom 12. Dezember 2018, 08:23 Uhr
Maxim
When Monday
What I sleep to much and my Parents go to the London eye
Who my parents and me.
Where In London (hotel)
Why I was in another room.
I sleep to much
In the morning I was in my hotel room and my Alarm clock ringing and I don’t hear it. And my Parents tough that’s I was out of my room and I went with my Brother to the London eye. I was in my room, I woke up and I see on my phone that’s 13 o’clock is. So I stand up brushed my teeth. I went out side and I called my Mother and I ask: ,, were are you? I want to go to the London eye.’’ She said: ,, I am at the London eye so hurry up to get here that’s we can drive together.’’ So I run to the London eye and I have done it I was so fast that I get to the London eye and I drive with my Parents.
Andreas
Does it have clear paragraphs?
No the text don't have clear paragraphs.
What is the topic sentence in each paragraph?
You don't write paragraphs. Pleas make a new text with 4 paragraphs.
Do you get information about the 5 Ws?
Yes I get informations About the 5 Ws.
